Senin, 21 Mei 2012

Breaking Heart


Mick and Daph, a couple who look very happy and tender-hearted. Day after day, month after month, and 2 years they've spent together.  All their problems can be solved together.

Until at one time, Mick was chosen as the leader of an organization. Starting from then, Mick has more busy, has more responsibility to his organization. First, Daph happy for her boyfriend's who was selected as leader. But as time went on, Mick often forget about Daph, often don't reply sms from Daph. Not even giving the news to Daph.

It makes Daph very sad, and often tears because he really missed Mick who had always pay attention to her. Already some times they met to discuss the future of their relationship, Mick ever had promised to be more attentive to Daph, but it only lasted a few days. Mick then returned to busy life.

Daph feeling so crushed, her heart's like broken into pieces. And in one day, the day when Daph's patience exhausted . She did not want to sad all the time. and finally Daph chose to break her relationship with Mick. Although, this is so hard to say it, but Daph have to say it. 

Then they were making plans to meet at their usual meeting place. There they talked as usual, but in the midst of conversation, he immediately tell what the purpose of their meeting. Daph said that their relationship must end right now.

Mick was silent and unable to speak. Mick could not believe his relationship with Daph will end. Mick asked Daph for cancel what she want and thinking once again. But Daph still on his choice. Daph told that she feeling so sad and upset with Mick's attitude. She can't forgive him again. Mick bowed sluggish after hearing of Daph said, and without realizing the tears rolling down her cheeks. Mick could not do anything else. Mick have to accept what happened. Mick feeling so regret because have been break Daph's heart. Now, 2 years passed don't have mean again

Jumat, 24 Februari 2012

SPOOF TEXT

First Text


Where is my bag?
 There is a child, his name is Ucok. He school in SMAN 1. And he likes to hastily.
One day, Ucok late to wake up.  So, he is hastily to go to school. When he comes in his class, he goes to the toilet. After that, he back to the class.
In his class, he is surprised, because his bag is disappear.  He tries to look for anywhere, but he can’t  find it. Imagine his alarm, his bag is definitely hidden by his friends. So, he reported it to his teacher. But no one of her friends to confessed. He so angry.
When back to home, he sees  his bag on the sofa. So, actually he forgets to bring his bag.

Text Analyzing 
       Orientation
Ucok is a student who like to hastily
       Event 1
Ucok late to wake up.
       Event 2                
Ucok’s bag disappear.
       Event 3
Ucok can’t find his bag anywhere.
       Event 4
 No one of her friends to confessed.
       Twist
Ucok forget to bring his bag.

Second Text


The Fucking Man
 One time , when there was no  teacher in my  class.  I was going my homework. Sunddenly my friend is names is Faris. He came to me in a hurry.
“What’s wrong with you?” Asked me. “I want to tell you an important thing.” answered Faris with serious face. He made me curious. “What’s that?”asked me. “It’s our secret. Don’t tell it to anyone!”. I answered, “Agree!”
“Actually…”said him. “What?!”. “Actually, I’m…”. “Hurry up! I don’t have many time!” said me. “Actually, I am… SPIDERMAN!!!” said him and put his hand up like spiderman.

Text Analyzing
     Orientation
When there was teacher in my class, I   was doing my homework
     Event 1
Suddenly, Faris came to me.
     Event 2  
Faris tell an important thing and asked me didn’t tell it to anyone.
     Twist
Faris told actually he is SPIDERMAN , then he  puts his hand up like SPIDERMAN.



 Made by:
- Chrisarah Elga Adisa
- Dicky Juniawan Putra
- Febri Pribadi Setyo
- Kemal Alimul Haq
 

Kamis, 17 November 2011

EXPRESSION

Today, Kemal and Febri will visit their friend in the hospital
(Kemal and Febri go to the hospital)

Kemal   : In where’s room aang was treated ?
Febri      : On the 3rd floor room number 99

(Kemal and Febri  arrived in the room)

Kemal   : Excusme, Assalamu’alaikum
Aang      : Wa’alaikumsalam, oh Kemal, Febri
Febri      : Aang, there are some fruit for you
Aang      : Thanks friends
Febri      : How’s about your feet ang ?
Aang      : Thanks goodness, it’s getting better
Kemal   : Ooh I’m delight to hear that
Febri      : What you have been given treatment ?
Aang      : Done, yesterday I was doing some kind of teraphy
Febri      : That’s good, can I hold you feet?
Aang      : Ouch ! Don’t touch it ! It’s quite painful
Kemal   : Ang, when you can recover and return to school ?
Aang      : Doctor said, 2 days I can recover and return to scool
Kemal   : Ooh that’s great
Febri      : Ang, we should go home now cause we will study at Fajar’s house at 3 pm
Aang      : Ok, thanks for coming
Kemal   : See you, assalamu’alaikum
Aang      : Wa’alaikumsalam

( Kemal and Febri  leave the room and they go to parking lot)

Febri      : Mal, I want to buy  drink. Wait me at parking lot.
Kemal   : Ok pep
Febri      : Sip (y)

(Kemal arrives at parking lot)

Kemal   :Whose this bike?
Azhar    : It’s mine. Why?
Kemal   : Your bike block my bike.  Could you move your bike ?
Azhar    : I think your bike block my bike
Kemal   : So, you think I was wrong ?
Azhar    : Yes,  you were wrong
Kemal   : You were wrong !
Azhar    : You were wrong !

( And then they fight)
(Suddenly Febri was come)

Febri      : What’s wrong? Azhar what are you doing in here?
Azhar    : Oh Febri, he blocks my bike
Febri      : Zar. This is my friend, Kemal. Mal, this is my friend Azhar. It just a little problem, so don’t make    it more complicated
Azhar    :  Oh sorry mal, cause I block your away
Kemal   : Oh no problem zar.
Febri      : Mal, let’s go to Fajar’s house
Kemal   : Ok

( Kemal and Febri  go to Fajar’s house)